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My Spooky Story

Writer's picture: Aidan MooreAidan Moore

Name: Aidan Moore


As Max curiously looked through the window of the house his expression turned from a curious one to a horrified one as he stood outside the house petrified with fear. Max is a police detective. He works for the sb pd. Inside the house he could see a mad man. He was holding a horrifying tool. Max did not like the looks of it. It was sharp at the tips. Yeah, tips. It had 2 tips. It was squiggly in the middle. It was like a 2 sided dagger. He ran to his car. Then he drove to the pd. He went to the detective unit to tell his friend. His friend is named Jay Flem. he is also a detective. He investigates weird things like the 2 sided dagger. I explained what I had seen. He said to show him the house. They drove to the house together. They went in. they searched the house. It was abandoned like usual. The house is usually abandoned. It is not even in the city. It was on the top of a hill near the city. The windows are boarded up. All except the one Max looked through. Ivy grows on the place's walls. The garden beds in front are moldy and the plants in them are dead, all except one black and red one. That one must be special. It is no larger than a popsicle stick. It also has a brick chimney. Even though the place is abandoned, smoke sometimes still comes out of it. It gives me chills, says Max when he sees the smoke. This will be a long story to tell says Max as he starts to tell the tale. Max will be telling you this story. He remembers this spooky story very very well. Back to the story now. They left the house and went to their cars. The next day they got a spooky emergency call from a man named Jaden coxzberg. He told them this: I was walking and I saw a candle floating in the air in front of me. I stopped my car and went to examine the candle but it flew away hooting like it was mad. The police did not believe this story until they got 19 more calls from different people that were the same as the one Jaden had called about. Spooky it was. When Max was driving at night not many days after jaden had called he saw a floating candle as well. He did not like the way it floated around like a ghost did. It was bright like a candle. It was also burning with fire. It was a super scary sight. He looked at it, scared. He called a detective from the Spooky Thing’s department to come and investigate the floating candle.


Then he got out to touch it but it flew away. He was stunned. The next day he and Jay went to investigate the house on the hill. They found a little girl at the door. Her name was jenny. She was a girl that lived in the town 120 years ago!!!

I used to be mayor, she says. Marvin, my dad is this way. She started walking away. They followed her. She led them to the man Max had seen through the window at the beginning of this story. He said in a high voice. Ohh, joining us are you? It was creepy the way he spoke. Uhh said Max. it’s ok to be nervous, says marvin. Marvin said to follow them. They followed. He led them to a room. He told them to go in it. When they were in Marvin closed and locked the door. They were trapped in the room. They heard Marvin say, i'm glad you could join us today officers. Hahaha!!! Good bye now. The next day they were still stuck in the room. In the afternoon they heard police sirens and fire truck sirens. They were getting rescued by a search party. When they were saved and back at the police HQ they told the story. The next day Jenn arrived at police hq. My dad has evil plans for me. Max asked her how she was still alive. The answer was creepy. Marvin is my dad and I am jenny. I know Jenny the mayor's dad was not marvin nor did her mom have any kids but me. Then how Max asked. Well you see marvin does not like me at all, so he is going to do evil things to me. Marvin is my godfather. He wants me to be his next science experiment. But how are you or Marvin alive? Asked Max. Well, I'm Jenny the mayor’s sister. We had the same name but I'm 70 years younger than Jenny. Marvin is 25 and just wants to be my godfather. Ohh said max. This was the last time they ever saw or heard from Jenny or Marvin.



THE END.


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